At dVerse Merril is hosting Poetics with an invitation to write about windows in any form.
dVerse Poets – Poetics – Window Gazing
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“My soul is from elsewhere, I’m sure of that, and I intend to end up there.” Rumi
I Fell You held a window in your palm, your heart in clear view tinged with mango and lime like your lips, soft spiced dew, blew the wind, the dove, your hair flew as an offering to the world, double pressed, carefree, after the love flood, a wonder in peach and white, I fell through your window. Copyright 2023 ©️Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
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A very interesting take on the window prompt, Paul. I hope the glass did not shatter as your fell through!! :>)
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Strangely it seems not 🙂 many thanks Dwight
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Such an excellent poem Paul
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Thank you very much Cheryl 🙂
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Gloriously romantic, Paul. I love your take on the prompt. Thank you!
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Loving your response Merril 🙂
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You’re welcome! 😊
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The first line was so unique, a window in the palm of her hands, luring one in. The details are divine. Especially love “your hair flew as an offering to the world”.
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Thank you so much Mish, I wanted something ethereal, I think it worked.
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I love that kind of falling.
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😉
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Wonderful!
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Thank you for that 🙂
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Thank you for such beautiful poetry.
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My pleasure indeed 🙂
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much.
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A great summertime romance. Thanks for sharing, Paul! xx Michael
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Thank you very much Michael 🙂
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It’s just wow n beautifullly written. A loving poem with beautiful words n feelings ❤👌
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Thank you so much for your lovely response Suma.
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Wow!
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Many thanks indeed 🙂
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Can you follow my blog
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I will see 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you very much 🙂
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