At dVerse Ingrid is hosting Poetics with an invitation to write about a vision or a dream or both.
dVerse Poets – Poetics – Visionary Poetry
“Harmony exists no less in difference than in likeness ….” Margaret Fuller
Behind My Eyes Behind my eyes a restful view the shimmer of the sun silver on languid rippled waves slowly rolling in a sea of hearts turned towards a unitive beat a yearning for the good of the one beside or next to that one without any objectification a mass of connection felt underneath my skin an inexplicable drawing, wanting, somehow knowing, a desire between all towards a love for all without question or presumption at once, possible futures erupting salvific networks of belonging that linger in waking somewhere in the background the sound of water caressing a gentle shore. Copyright 2023 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
Such a restful poem.
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Thank you for that Jacqui, much appreciated.
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Yes. Lovely.
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You’ve captured the bewildering yet somehow soothing nature of dreams so well here Paul!
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Thank you very much Ingrid.
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Dreams certainly can be confusing and vague. I like your piece your Paul, well written.
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Thank you Rob 🙂
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what a comforting dream. No reason to wake.
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Yes, just imagine! 🙂
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Now that’s a nice dream.
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Thank you so much
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Now that is EXQUISITE! You depict the soft, soothing and yet bewildering nature of a dream so well! ❤️❤️
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Many thanks Sanaa 🙂
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I like how you’ve formatted this poem. The way the lines are spaced makes it easy for the reader to enter a contemplative frame of mind.
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Thank you Liz, yes – trying out a few new ways for me.
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You’re welcome, Paul. It always good to try out new forms for out poems to live in.
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Yes indeed.
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Nice, sounds like an amalgamation of both material and spiritual qualities in the dream. A very mystical blend of sights, sounds, and “knowings.” I especially liked “salvific networks,” and the love for all, otherwise known as “agape.”
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Agape indeed, well spotted, and much needed right now 🙂 Thank you.
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I really adore this one, Paul ❤
~David
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Ah, much appreciated David, so glad it spoke.
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thank you so much Michael 🙂
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A very beautiful reflective poem once again
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Thank you so much 🙂
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