At dVerse Lillian is hosting poetics with an invitation to use one or more movie titles from the Razzies listed as line in a poem.
dVerse Poets – Poetics – A Razzie Or Two
I chose the movie title – The Lonely Lady (1983)

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“I am lonely, yet not everybody will do.” Anais Nin
She Is Silence I've seen her before, she's from every town, heavy with sigh, head to the ground, she is silence within silence, a reminder of a popular song, disengaged, eyes somewhere else, feet never collecting dust, her words make no sound. Once she may have smiled, even loved, but now she appears to be the lonely lady, preoccupied, staring through. Copyright 2022 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
A sad poem about aging. I’ve seen her before, silence within silence
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Yes, sadder if no preparation is made to find community of some sort, see some like that. Yes, silence within silence.
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You’ve described her so well. (I think there’s a word missing in the first line?) Do hope you’ll complete the survey on OLN LIVE: have heard from many and all answers are very helpful.
I most liked these words here
“heavy with sigh,
head to the ground,
she is silence within silence,” and her feet never collecting dust.
Excellent imagery.
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Thank you so much Lillian – and yes, well spotted (thank you) there was a word missing.
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So sad. I look at aging as a gift. I am not ready for the end of this life, but I do look forward to the next, wherever and whatever that may be.
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Yes, sad indeed, but i agree with you, more to come when the time is ready.
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Many thanks 🙂
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A good description of older people without connections to the community or own children. xx Michael
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Yes, there’s a certain loneliness for those who don’t have good community.
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beautiful and poignant piece ❤
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Thank you so much.
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This is incredibly deep and poignant, Paul! I especially resonate with; “she is silence within silence, a reminder of a popular song.”💘💘
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Thank you so much Sanaa 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Yes, too many like her. Longevity can be a curse for some.
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There’s a sadness in this poem
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Yes, those who isolate themselves.
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