
“Her eyes are the first indication of her infirmity, or rather that she resides in more than one world.” Stephanie Kallos
It's Unravelling She is old now, complaining supersedes vitality, anger launched at the world which has passed her by, rather than engage or indulge. I say to myself, she's doing a Stalin, painting herself into stories and memories where she never was, could never be, even in dreams. I call her the fictioneer, making up her life in retrospect, telling her story by invention because the real was too ordinary, arguing for the perfect image of herself, but it's all unravelling now. Copyright 2022 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
Wonderful peak into the mind of a person with possible dementia.
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Yes, have journeyed with a few, awful at times.
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Goodness, what a very accurate picture of people we all know. There’s a lifetime of wisdom behind this poem 🙏
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Oh, this poem is heartrending–and so, so insightful.
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I meant to add that I think it’s one of your best.
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Thank you very much indeed Liz.
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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Really appreciate this Liz
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Great poem but sad
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Yes, very sad.
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Hence why it’s important to face who we are whenever we can. Too many stories develop otherwise but the truth will always be there.
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Yes, so true.
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Bittersweet. Beautiful because the language conveys the intimate compassion and love of the speaker for the subject. Beautiful because of the subject’s desire for greater meaning.
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Thank you for sharing this, Yes, insightful Lisa, much appreciated
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I imagine it’s the way we’ll all go. Beautiful write, Paul.
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Yes, I have that thought often – many thanks indeed Susi
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You’re welcome, Paul!
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