At dVerse Laura is hosting Meeting the Bar with an invitation to choose one of five lines and to invert the line to vertical making each word the beginning of a line for a new poem.
The line I have chosen is “Since there’s no help, come let us kiss and part.” from ‘Idea 61’ by Michael Drayton.
dVerse Poets – MTB – Vertical Lines of kisses
“I never want to stop making memories with you.” Pierre Jeanty
Since And Again Since the first time there's been no holding back, no sense of moderation, help me in my distress, come, hold me closer, tighter, let us retire to best of us in every possible way, kiss me now with thick passion, and again, again, part from me never. Copyright 2022 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
Well done. I’m off to try my hand at it.
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Thank you very much Judy
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Ah, lovely . . .
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Thank you Liz
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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Love this ☺️
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Many thanks Cheryl
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Lovely!
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Thank you very much Rupali
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Like your response to the prompt. Well done.
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Many thanks Patricia, much appreciated.
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Enjoyed the enjambment, wonderful flow in this plea for love.
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Thank you Mish, so glad you enjoyed this.
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Verg fitting to the theme and you rocked the prompt 👍
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Thank you so much for this.
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This was a touching romantic write Paul — excellent my friend! 👍🏼🙂✌🏼❤️
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Very kind Rob, thank you so much. 🙂
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“Retire to the best of us in every possible way” ❤
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Many thanks for sharing 🙂 Mary – appreciated.
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Such a powerful fantasy, Paul. Only the truly blessed are gifted with such eternal embrace.
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many thanks Lisa, yes, I do agree, only they.
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a lovely tight formation to your poem that reflects the holding – ‘thick passion’ is unique and speaks volumes
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Appreciate your response and thought Laura, thank you.
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A beautiful love poem Paul ☺️❤️
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Thank you so much Christine. 🙂
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love the romance in the prompt well done Paul!
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Many thanks Cindy ❤️
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You’re most welcome Paul! 💖💖
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You did so well in capturing that urge of passion.
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Thank you Bjorn, much appreciated.
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Thank you Michael 🙂
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Awww, very heart touching, with a happy ending. xx Michael
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🙂 I’m glad it had that affect, thank you very much xx
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Sigh! This is so passionate, Paul.
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Thank you very much Punam
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Beautiful – so skilful also how you make such a beautifully deep poem from the words of one line of another poem
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I really enjoyed this one too.
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