At dVerse Grace is hosting Poetry Form with an invitation to write an Octelle ( 8 lines with 88777788 syllables and aabbccaa rhyming) and the poem to include personification.
“Simply wait, be quiet, still the world will freely offer itself to you.” Franz Kafka
Such Wonder There was such wonder in the clouds, faces and shapes of lowly crowds, rising misty portraiture, clouds as a caricature, taking me from the dark blight, into my heart of clear light, where there's no place for any dowds, just clouds as heavenly love shrouds. Copyright 2022 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
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Beautiful!
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Many thanks 🙂
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You’re welcome ☺️!
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Very nice! I’ve yet to tackle it☺️
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I hope to get to yours soon, thank you Cheryl.
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There is wonder all around us. Just just have to look for it!
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Yes, one must pay attention, so much to rejoice in.
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This is absolutely stellar writing here, Paul! I love how graceful the rhymes are especially; “rising misty portraiture/clouds as a caricature.” 💘💘
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Thank you so much Sanaa 🙂
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Beautiful imagery
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Many thanks Patricia.
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Very nice!!!! God bless!
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Thank you very much Tammy, you too 🙂
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You’re very much welcome…. ❤ thanks! 😊
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You captured the wonder of clouds. Love these lines:
rising misty portraiture,
clouds as a caricature,
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Thank you Grace, I really enjoyed this and I think I’ll try some more.
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thank you very much, appreciating your response.
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Beautiful, Paul! I like what you did to the ending.
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Thank you so much for this Sara, appreciated.
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Wow looks very difficult structure to this – such a great poem and so clever
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It was a challenge, but I sure enjoyed it.
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