At dVerse Grace is hosting Poetry Forms with an invitation to write a Loop Poem where the last line of each line in a stanza becomes the first line of successive lines. For more detail follow the link below:
I’m submitting a non-rhyming Loop Poem.
dVerse Poets – Poetry Forms – Loop Poetry

“Holding on is believing that there’s only a past; letting go is knowing that there’s a future.” Daphne Rose Kingma
I Wonder I wonder now what I might pick up, up is the surge of my recovering, recovering spontaneity well loosed, loosed from the hollows of routine. This new ground on which to stand, stand I will no matter the inconvenience, inconvenience is mostly perspective, perspective is mostly inconvenience. And what of the idle threat of progress, progress really needs to be threaded, threaded carefully and hung on a wall, wall of all my dead trophies. Such things need to die that I might, might live as if for the first time, time being a fragility of the ego I, I wonder now what I might pick up. Copyright 2022 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
Right on time. Thank you, bro 🙏
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Amazing how the universe works 🙂
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Ya mon
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😉
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A wonderful piece Paul.
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Thank you indeed Ruapli, much appreciated.
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I specially like this perspective:
stand I will no matter the inconvenience,
inconvenience is mostly perspective,
Your loop poetry also goes back to the first line. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you very much Grace.
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Another poetry form that’s new to me!
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dVerse really are so good at keeping the forms and practice going.
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beautifully written, as always.
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Thank you so much
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Thank you Micahel xx
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A perfect reminder also for me. Thanks, Paul! xx Michael
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My pleasure Michael
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This one really got me in the feels, Paul. The watershed moment for me:
“Such things need to die that I might,
might live as if for the first time,”
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Wow, thank you for sharing that Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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Clever but I find the repetitive words distracting
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