At dVerse Bjorn is hosting Meeting the Bar with an invitation to write a poem of dissonance. For further details and an informative link follow the link below.
dVerse Poets – MTB – Meet The Bar With Dissonance

“Dissonance is the truth about harmony.” Theodor Adorno
But I sit to sip, the brew is kind but the battle hardened walls ricochet shrill, gaudy, laughter unsettling my mood, my ears assaulted by the grinder's piercing turbine making speech redundant, along with scraping chairs, clanking cups, call that a ringtone, and keep your polite frivol of exchange, I rise to go for sanity. Copyright 2022 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®️
A poem that expresses my thoughts/reactions as well ~~ Bravo!
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I’m glad to know that it connects Helen, I wish it weren’t so … thank you 🙂
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I agree with you. Sometimes to remain sane, or keep what little sanity I have left, I find myself on the run.
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Yes, solitude can be difficult, but also, it can be hard to find in the noise of the world.
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I find noise to be more intrusive and difficult to deal with as I grow older……even with
diminished hearing (lol!).
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The irony, someone trained did tell me as we age the ear picks up all the stuff we sued to filter out, damnable really 🙂
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Ugh!
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Yes, my reaction too!
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So much for atmosphere!
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Yeah, I prefer the quieter moody places 🙂
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Very well done! That’s exactly the environment that sends me fleeing out the door.
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Yes, me too, prefer to go somewhere i can think and/or converse 🙂
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“Thje brew is kind”. Well done.
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I love that sort of brew, lifts my morning, thank you 🙂
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Oh. You meant coffee? 😉
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Lol, though it could easily have been stronger, same issue too.
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Might lace your coffee with a dollop of something?
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The… 😉
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I was thinking about a poem that relies on all the auto-correct, typos and mistakes everyone makes (self included of course), could be fun 🙂
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I sit to sip would wreak havoc with the auto-correct. (I turned it off on all my “screens”, since I write in three languages. Auto-correct drives me crazy. Nor do i like a machine to put words in my mouth… 😉
(Soon the machine will tell which words are PC or not…)
Have a nice Sunday. Though that must be a hard day’s work for you. (I imagine you’re Church of England?) (How’s that work Down UNder? Church of Oz? That would be nice…)
Cheers my friend
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Very much agreed Brian, have a great weekend 🙂
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I was gonna say You too, but you’re already Monday. Have a great week Paul
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Long weekend here, state holiday.
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Nice. Enjoy la dolce vitta.
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I hear ya!
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O thank you Carol 🙂
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Well put, Sir. I can relate to this. Cheers!
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I prefer the quieter spaces, I’m sure you do too.
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Too right, Sir.
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🙂
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Good one, Paul 🙂
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Thank you very much Lynn
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Nicee 💥
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Thank you for that 🙂
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Sometimes the only thing that helps is to find a place of solitude….
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O yes indeed Bjorn
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Thank you again Michael
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Beautiful, and it also meets my situation, most time of the day. xx Michael
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Always looking for the quieter spaces these days.
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Many thanks
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Hear Hear!!
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A journey friend, glad for that, many thanks Kally.
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Great poem – been there!
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Yes, places we couldn’t hear ourselves think, ghastly.
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beautifully written!!!
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Thank you so much.
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