At dVerse De has invited us to write a Quadrille (44 words) on some form of the word heart.
dVerse Poets – Quadrille- Heart
“Yours is the light by which my spirit’s born ….” ee cummings
Astro-logical There is no dys in the topia of my heart where you're concerned, your ample fullness fills my darkly mind with tingled pulses of rhythmic, to the bone sensatiopns, that caffeinate my hours with a cornucopia of luminous astrologia that simply makes me dizzy. Copyright 2021 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®
parallax 
A smile-inducing poem!
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Glad to have brought you a smile Liz.
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🙂
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Sharp like a Diamond!
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Thank you Datta
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Is that love in simple, plain English, Paul! 😉
Love it.
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It sure is Punam, and many thanks 🙂
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ee cummings is one of my favorite poets!!!! I love your nod to his wonderfully unique style!
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Yes, a wonderful poet, he stood out in the crowd.
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It touched me and made me smile..
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I am so glad it brought a smile, thank you for sharing the affect 🙂
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Fun!
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🙂
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Better cornu than dys , I always say!
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Lol, I’m with that Beverly
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LOVE what you did with that first line, especially. Lots of fun word choices here.
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Thank you very much indeed De.
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You’re a lucky man then☺️
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Absolutely 🙂
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Bill,
Beautifully rendered. Love is the logic of the stars: “luminous,” dizzying.
pax,
dora
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Thank you so much Dora 🙂 pax, Paul
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Wonderful poem. Enjoyed it.
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Thank you very much for that Bill.
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You’re welcome.
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Made me smile, Paul. Sounds like love to me.
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You got it, well spotted Patricia, yes indeed.
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Clever opening lines, enjoyed my visit
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Thank you so much and thank you for the visit.
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fabulous use of words in this loving tribute 🙂
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Thank you for that Kate, it is indeed a tribute.
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is the book done?
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Progressing 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Thank you very much for that Jonathan.
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A dizzying quadrille! Love your use of ‘caffeinate’
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Thank you very much Ingrid, much appreciated.
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Yes dizzying with luminous astrology.
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🙂 Thank you for that Bjorn
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Many thanks Chuck
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Always a pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, Paul!! Have a great day!
😊👍✨✨🎉
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“caffeinate my hours with a
cornucopia of luminous astrologia”
Your use of phrasing here is outstanding, Paul.
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Thank you so much Sara – so glad you enjoyed that line.
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l love the playfulness with words in this beautiful poem
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wow Paul! Your so talented! I loved this! Well done!
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High praise indeed Carol, thank you so much for this, much appreciated.
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