
“People become attached to their burdens sometimes more than the burdens are attached to them.” George Bernard Shaw
I Knew I Wouldn't Worry Right before I left I knew I wouldn't worry, I left things like this to get further away, to inhabit the world so very differently, while at the same time beginning to fade. I left things like this to get further away from the static tradition of meaning, while at the same time beginning to fade, the pressures falling away yet still there. From the static tradition of meaning, multiple temporalities spoil its meaning, the pressures falling away yet still there, begging the question as to its purpose. Multiple temporalities spoil its meaning, to inhabit the world so very differently begging the question as to its purpose, right before I left I knew I wouldn't worry. Copyright 2021 ©Paul Vincent Cannon All Rights Reserved ®
Very, very brilliant and effective construction!
PV you ‘ bring the real life situations into your poems!
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Thank you for that response and for picking up on that – so important to me as I really feel the real life is a must in my writing.
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I fully agree with datta’s comment, and your answer, as real life has to take place in writings. 😉 xx Michael
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Many thanks for that Michael 🙂
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You are welcome, Paul! Thank you as well, and have a nice rest of the week. xx Michael
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I really appreciate how the poem resolves in the last stanza.
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Thank you so much Liz.
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You’re most welcome, Paul.
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Thank you Michael, very kind.
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Thank you too, for your kindness and sharing your wonderful poetry with us. xx Michael
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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