
“Railway termini are our gates to the glorious and the unknown.” E. M. Forster
That Train The train of creative questions pulled into the station, disbursing openness and opportunity like spilt milk, offering succour for those ready to drink its ideas and embrace a future soon to be remembered. disbursing oppenness and opportunity like spilt milk, parting the mists of close indifference and fear, and embrace a future soon to be remembered, untelling the stories that limit and hold us prisoner. Parting the mist of close indifference and fear, to face the near reality our naked selves, untelling the stories that limit and hold us prisoner, knowing that love is unconditionally ours. To face the near reality of our naked selves, offering succour for those ready to drink its ideas, knowing that love is unconditionally ours, the train of creative questions pulled into the station. ©Paul Vincent Cannon
Paul, the pantoum is not my favorite form of poetry, but it works very well in this lovely poem. I like the phrase, “train of creativity.” An apt metaphor and a wonderful photo! ❤ Have a great week!
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Thank you for the high praise – that this could capture you even though it’s not your favourite style, many thanks indeed Cheryl.
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You do these so well, Paul! The rhythm has the feel of a train on the tracks taking us to worlds yet unknown.
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Very kind Chris, I love your description very much indeed, many thanks for this.
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I shall hop a freight on a nonstop run to Creativity Town!
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What a great idea, I will join you …. 🙂
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All aboard! 😀
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Right O
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Many thanks for the share Chuck.
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Always a pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, Paul!! Have a great day!
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I hope you’ve enjoyed your weekend Chuck 🙂
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Train of creativity so cool!
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Many thanks Emine.
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Expressed so beautifully, Paul.
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Love the metaphors so much! Thank you for sharing again, Paul!
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Thank you for reading and offering your reactions Michael, much appreciated 🙂
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I love this style of poetry. I particularly like the line, “untelling the stories that limit and hold us prisoner.” That is so true on so many different levels
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Yes, I think our self-talk is more critical at times, thank you for sharing this.
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What a beautiful framework of creativity…trains hold such an elegant and magestic presence in my mind.😊
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Then we are indeed on the same page, I resonate with your response so much, many thanks for sharing that.
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You’re so welcome 😃
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What an amazing pantoum – I love it
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Thank you 🙂
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