
“She was like the moon – part of her was always hidden away.” Dia Reeves
Before The Turning Spring's last reversion, a chemise for moon before the turning of summer's bold tune, an unbuttoned salute to epicurean dulges promenading along our damp, warm skin, in the misted mystery of this omened night, awaiting declarations of yes, yes, along our avenue of sheets. ©Paul Vincent Cannon
A night full of promise under a delicate veil of moonlight… what a sumptuous image you conjure, Paul!
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Dear Paul Vincent Cannon,
I concur with Chris Hall. Your poem is very evocative indeed. The chosen image of the moon is definitely setting the ambiance.
What else can I say but to resonate with the tenet and spirit of your poem with my special poem published in the post entitled “🎴 If My Name Were Moon Tonight… 🌛🌝🎑🈷 with Clair de Lune 🌕”, where I hope that you will snap up the chance to watch my dynamic animation produced in high resolution (1920 x 1280) at https://soundeagle.wordpress.com/2020/10/10/if-my-name-were-moon-tonight-with-clair-de-lune/
The animation starts calmly and will gradually climax. The post also comes with my rhyming poem and musical performance. Please enjoy the animation on the big high-resolution screen of your desktop or laptop computer.
Happy summer to you very soon after the “Spring’s last reversion”!
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Thank you so much, and thank you for the link too, I will.
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Dear Paul,
You are very welcome. Your poem is so excellent and resonates so well with me that I have just finished hyperlinking it to two of my posts so that my readers can visit your post and enjoy your poem.
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I see what mean, a tour de force indeed, I did enjoy it very much, excellent work on both fronts.
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Dear Paul,
I am delighted to read your comment here. Thank you for your feedback and compliment. Given that your comment also pertains to my said post, I would really appreciate it if you could kindly submit your excellent comment to the comment section in my said post too.
You can simply copy and paste your previous comment and perhaps add more if you have something extra to say. Thank you in anticipation.
Happy December!
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And also to you 🙂
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Love your response Chris, wow.
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I love the moon and feel this poem captured it’s presence in the night sky perfectly 💞
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Nice to share a common love for the moon Hannah.
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It is indeed 🙂 🌙
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So soft. Lovely.
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Thank you Rupali, I love your response.
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Thank you for sharing.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Happy to share, Paul! 😊✨✨🎉
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The moon her cast her spell . . .
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Argh, fumble fingers! The moon has cast her spell . . .
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I know this type of finger 🙂 Yes indeed, she certainly has. I don’t think I’m done with moon yet (if ever). Many thanks Liz.
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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🙂
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Bravo💃Love The Softness and So Beautiful😩😇
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I love your thoughts on this, thank you.
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I love your use of ‘chemise’ ! Evokes a sensual image.
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Yes, I really do prefer the understated approach, and it just seemed to work well. Thank you so much Punam.
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So you do and it worked wonderfully. You are welcome, Paul.
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I love the usage of the moon in romantic context, very much. Thank you, Paul!
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My pleasure, thank you indeed.
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You too, Paul!
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I love the cleverly crafted words in this poem evolving such sensations
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you 🙂
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