At dVerse, Laura is hosting Poetics with an invitation to the Pleiades Form – seven lines of seven syllables, each line beginning with the first letter of the title which must be one word. dVerse Poets – Poetics – Stars That Count
“The Pleiades are there winking at me.” Ted Simon
Sighing Seven being perfection, spiritual without doubt, sisters floating like lovers sighing eternal yearns stargazing dreams like voyeurs, star dusting talis dreams of spacious, luscious liminance. ©Paul Vincent Cannon
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sensational with all those s sounds and dreamy luminescence
“sighing eternal yearns
stargazing dreams like voyeurs”
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Thank you Laura, I so enjoyed this.
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Excellent
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Thank you Cheryl 🙂
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Lovely photo and poem. I remember as a child my father showing me this constellation. Stay safe and be happy, Strider! ❤
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Ha, I will, thank you for sharing Cheryl.
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Sorry, Paul. Looks like I got my wires crossed!
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But no short circuit blowout.
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This sings for me… heavenly seven
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That is wonderful Bjorn, thank you.
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great . better than my try. mine was not good enough to make it to my blog
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I am sorry to hear that, though I think we are incredibly hard on ourselves. I do hope you rework it, there must be something in it?
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I have put in the long rework list
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Great, I’m certain you’ll nail it.
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A perfect dreamy poem for a starry, starry night. (Sighing in a good way.)
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Yes, good liminal sighs, I love those starry nights too. Thank you so much Liz.
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This was an engaging piece Paul I enjoyed it.
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Thank you for sharing how it affected you Rob, much appreciated.
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Your Pleiad sparkles with sibilance, Paul!
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I love sounds particularly, thank you for noticing Kim.
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So well done, Paul. Like others, I love the susurration of your stars.
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Thank you so much Chris, what a delightful response.
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Oooh I love it.. I just tried one and will post sometime soon! ❤️
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Such fun, looking forward to reading yours.
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❤️🤗🙏
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yes, fun… I made 2 and just posted it.. xo ❤️
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Woohoo
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lol.. you better wait till you read it before you say anything but i always love a twofer.. xo
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Bargain 😉
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👏👏🤣
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Magical.
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Thank you Rupali
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Its showing positive eternity. Michael
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Thank you Michael.
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Thank you too, Paul!
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🙂
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Well done – always amazed at what you can do with words
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Sometimes they just write themselves.
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