November 8, 2020 · 4:25 pm
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Most Perfect – poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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“To me, every hour of the day and night is an unspeakably perfect miracle.” Walt Whitman

Most Perfect

I pitched this tent some time ago,
it was wherever I went, a home, 
of souling unity or fierce divide,
as life is wont to provoke at whim
it sometimes seems, but today
was that day when all was
smooth creamy vermillion, a 
tangerined exquisite joy and
azure carolling, a hearts carillon 
of songbird treasures, my tent
at once restored unblemished,
the tuning fork as lightning
released, today was that day,
the most perfect day.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

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39 responses to “Most Perfect – poem by Paul Vincent Cannon”

  1. newepicauthor
    November 8, 2020 at 4:41 pm

    I bought a tent, but I never pitched it, as it seemed like too much trouble.

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  2. sgeoil
    November 8, 2020 at 4:44 pm

    A wonderful verse full of rich sensory images!

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  3. Laura Denise
    November 8, 2020 at 5:16 pm

    Wow! So beautifully penned!

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  5. msjadeli
    November 8, 2020 at 8:01 pm

    Lovely! To be alive is a gift to be savored each and every day, you’re right. Some days are better than others, and your creamy vermillion, tangerine joy one sounds like a good’n.

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  6. Rupali
    November 8, 2020 at 8:03 pm

    So beautiful. Who wouldn’t love such perfect day.

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  7. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet
    November 9, 2020 at 3:46 am

    Very lovely poem! “a hearts ‘carillon of songbird treasures” is especially beautiful! ❤

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  8. Chris Hall
    November 9, 2020 at 2:49 pm

    I’m hearing Lou Reed start to sing…

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  9. Megha's World
    November 9, 2020 at 6:34 pm

    Aha,..your words made it the most perfect day.

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  11. Liz Gauffreau
    November 10, 2020 at 2:41 am

    I love your evocation of a perfect day. Reading it reminded me that there really are perfect days, and I thank you for the reminder.

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  13. OIKOS™-Editorial
    November 10, 2020 at 5:23 pm

    A great painting, made only by words. 😉 I like very much the phrase “a hearts carillon of songbird treasures”. Michael

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  14. OIKOS™-Editorial
    November 10, 2020 at 5:29 pm

    Sorry, need to learn better grammar “made of words” is better. 😉

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  15. Charis Counselling
    November 11, 2020 at 12:36 am

    Glad you enjoyed it 😄 So beautifully remembered in these words

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