Frank is hosting Haibun Monday at dVerse and has invited us to use the word moon. dVerse Poets – Haibun Monday – To The Moon

“The moon was up, painting the world silver, making things look just a little more alive.” N.D. Wilson
To The Moon
I found myself by a water darkly as moon wandered by and awakened my my soul with loves so ablaze with spring’s life as to raise the dead so long moribund of colour and light, and at once now alive. I sat for a while in night’s shadow as moon loved me, igniting my gladsome heart afresh with a thousand, thousand moments of radiant delight as a lake of fertile lotus. I stayed long in the hope that desire would kindle once more.
Transcending moon shines while night heron wades plenty of fish here. ©Paul Vincent Cannon
So vivid, Paul.
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Many thanks Punam.
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You are welcome.
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This could be one of the sweetest words written for moon.❤️
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Thank you so much 🙂
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:)❤️ following to read more!
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Much appreciated.
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“ Transcending moon shines
while night heron wades
plenty of fish here”
Abundant haibun Paul!
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Thank you Rob, very much appreciated, yes, indeed, I was aiming for that sense of largess.
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A wandering moon ~~~ I enjoyed this immensely.
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Many thanks for sharing that Helen 🙂
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I really love this… what a wonderful image, and the sad waiting in the end… the moon is not a trustworthy mistress.
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Thank you Bjorn, I do agree, yes, the mood is not what she seems.
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As erotic and evocative a tribute to the moon as I’ve seen. Beautifully done!
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This is the line I will take away from this moment spent under the moon’s spell: “I found myself by a water darkly.” I love how it sounds.
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I’m always amazed at what touches other people, that line came first, so glad it spoke to you, thank you Liz.
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That makes perfect sense. The line grabbed me because of how it sounds. Those of the lines that come to me first as well.
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I see, I think that is how I find other writings too.
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much Leif.
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These are words to roll around in the mouth and savour. Sweet praise for the moon goddess.
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Such a delightful response, thank you Chris.
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A great compliment to the moon.
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Very kind, thank you so much Michael.
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🙂
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Paul, Great halibun. Exquisite haiku! ❤ Have a great weekend! Cheryl
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Thank you so much for sharing that Cheryl.
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Loving your moon poems – this one is particularly beautiful
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Thank you, I’m really enjoying writing them.
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Thank you 🙂
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