More – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

At dVerse guest host Sanaa has invited us to write exploring erotica as a literary genre (what makes a poem erotic?).

dVerse Poets – Poetics – Erotica

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“Speechless, we made love in mist and clouds.” Lan Ling

More

She smiled 
as she teased two cherries
with her glistening lips,
rolling their smoothness
around her eager tongue,
grazing them gently
until they surrendered
their sweet juice upon
her chin, and he smiled
as she took two more.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

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59 responses to “More – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Leaves a lot to the imagination. I like this approach – sensually fruity.

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  2. sanaarizvi

    This is absolutely awe-inspiring! ❤️ I love how succinct this poem is – seductive and sweet it leads the reader right in! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 🙂

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  3. Very sensual and descriptive. Such a vivid take on the prompt, and it is as well beautifully written.

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  4. You captured it very well with this one Paul~

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  5. Killer Paul. Well expressed food eroticism. Enjoyed this! 🙂

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  6. Love the approach to the subjects.. and cherries are sexy indeed.

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  7. Short, sweet and suggestive. Good one.

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  8. Oh, the mind does wonder.

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  9. Beverly Crawford

    This is classily erotic! It so elegantly leads the mind toward senuous thoughts.

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  10. Beverly Crawford

    Oops! I meant eloquently, not elegantly!

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  11. She knows exactly what she is doing to him!
    Love this Paul! ❤

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  12. Sensuous, suggestive and flirtatious. Nice take!

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  13. I love the teasing suggestiveness of this one.

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  14. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    SHIVERING! 😀

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  15. I agree with Grace, less means more, the imagination does the work. Fruit is very sensual.

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  16. I’m really loving what you did!! Mmm! Are you going to make me go to the dictionary or maybe Siri? Ha! I think you did a bang up job on this and should write a series???? Please?

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  17. She knows what he likes!

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