I Am Until – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

Grace at dVerse has invited us to write considering the phrase ‘I am’ – first person narrative, for Meet The Bar. dVerse Poets – Meet The Bar

Photo by Gerald at pixabay.com ‘Insight’

“You are in integrity when the life you are living on the outside matches who you are on the inside.” Alan Cohen

I Am Until

It is that
I am complicit until I am not,
I am a lover until I am not,
I am justice unti I am not,
I am compassion until I am not,
I am awareness until I am not,
I am shaped until I am not
by all that surrounds 
where my feet touch 
the ground and, equally,
I am not until I am.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

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84 responses to “I Am Until – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Sherry Marr

    Very cleverly done. A poem that makes me think, for we are all that….until we are not. Wise words.

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  2. Truth.

    We can say we are,
    but our behavior will tell the truth
    much more than our words.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. So honest and raw. I absolutely love this!

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  4. Sounds like you are human😉

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  5. Who is perfec?. I certainly am not. But we try.

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  6. This was so good Paul. We are always in the driver’s seat and we determine who we are going to be at any given moment.

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  7. I was very relieved that this came to rest in a good place.

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  8. Your words bring out one’s battle to become. The quest for integrity.

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  9. I like this, the search for the answer and finding that the complicated route we set ourselves is really unnecessary. We are what we are. Soul searching is a form of self-indulgence, a comfort, rarely a revelation.

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  10. Thought provoking Paul.

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  11. “I am not until I am” – nice line.

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  12. I love this little bit of existentialism,
    so lovely, I especially love being freed from what surrounds, where our feet touch the ground, love the gently nuanced rhyming that frames the preceding list and punch line so well.

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  13. I love it Paul. You are you only in the moment!
    Dwight

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  14. Reading you is better than ice cream.

    Like

  15. Good use of This’es and that’s. All-that-is are variations on that theme.

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  16. Read it again, just going to say again how much I love “by all that surrounds where my feet touch the ground.” perpescacity Indeed

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  17. lync56

    I love the way you have formed this poem

    >

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Reblogged this on natshouseblog and commented:
    wonderful poem and sentiment, first one I went to today.

    Liked by 1 person

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