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“The moment in between what you once were, and who you are now becoming, is where the dance of life really takes place.” Barbara de Angelis
Making Her Own Path
Alone at last
she heard again the
whispered invitation
and took off her outer self,
dancing a conversation
of physical grace,
an exquisite ritual
formed of something
deep within,
making her own path
along an ordinary course.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
Paul, pvcann.com
I find that making your own path is generally the most rewarding way to go.
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I’m with that, it sure is.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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The de Angelis quote, your poem, and the image all dance very well together. On the silly association side, the lines “and took off her outer self,/
dancing a conversation” immediately reminded me of a song from the 1920s, “Ain’t No Sin to Take Off Your Skin (and Dance around in Your Bones).”
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I have heard that song, I’d forgotten it though, priceless connection.Thank you for the reminder and for sharing your response Liz.
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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Beautiful poem! Flows gracefully with that lovely quote. 🙂
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Thank you very much for that Jennifer. 🙂
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You are welcome! 🙂 🙂
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❤
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Thank you Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful words ❣️
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Thank you so much Megha.
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It shows to be a “back to the essentials”.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Chuck
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Always a pleasure, Paul!
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making her own path… – a wonderful journey. Beautiful, Paul.
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Thank you so much for that Amy.
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I am completely caught on the line “dancing a conversation”. Ugh, Paul what the hell?! How is it every poem I select there is always a line that just shoots out and snatches my feels right in the kisser. I’m so inspired by you.
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Well that is high praise indeed, thank you for sharing your response to the lines that impact you and for reading them too.
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Beautiful poem – love the twist
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I thought you might, thank you 🙂
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