February 17, 2020 · 3:04 pm
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Until – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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“Even the sun directs our gaze away from itself and to the life illumined by it.”  Eberhard Arnold

Until

The sun is just the sun
so far as the eyes are concerned
until the sun meets
horizon or cloud,
and every hue erupts,
bathing hearts with flutter,
even more so when the
sun meets your hair
offering highlights and
directing my gaze
to you.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

Paul, pvcann.com

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31 responses to “Until – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon”

  1. V.J. Knutson
    February 17, 2020 at 3:16 pm

    Love this Paul – the quotation, and how the poem illustrates it – your description of the sunrise/set and the light illuminating love.

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  6. equipsblog
    February 17, 2020 at 4:44 pm

    Simple and very effective.

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  7. Melinda
    February 17, 2020 at 7:02 pm

    Beautiful! I think this is my favorite: “and every hue erupts bathing hearts with flutter” It all has a lovely and soft feel to it ❤

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  8. newepicauthor
    February 17, 2020 at 8:53 pm

    There were bells on a hill
    But I never heard them ringing
    No, I never heard them at all
    Till there was you

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  9. Liz Gauffreau
    February 18, 2020 at 1:34 am

    Another wonderful love poem!

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  12. LuAnne Holder
    February 20, 2020 at 10:53 pm

    This is quite lovely, Paul. You have fed my recent obsession with sunrises and sunsets. Thank you.

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  14. lync56
    March 20, 2020 at 12:28 pm

    I love this one – I love the flow of it

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