Like A Wave – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

dVerse Poets – Poetics – Surrealism in Poems

Linda at dVerse has invited us to delve into surrealism.

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“An ecstasy is a thing that will not go into words; it feels like music.”  Mark Twain

Like A Wave

The water once gathered from the sky,
heaven’s bold gift
a recess of your mind
your dark iris hears, sees, and
tells a tale of something known
in the very core of that secret place,
turning, writhing, resisting,
as the piper plays
tunes move through you,
a smooth melolagnia,
your hairs stand
rippling, like a wave
as you soak deep
the abiding presence
washing over,
now spent
as night.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

Paul, pvcann.com

20 Comments

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20 responses to “Like A Wave – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. It’s your words that capture me in this poem, Paul – “recess”, “dark”, “secret”, “night” – they draw me into a hidden place, and unknown both frightening and yet fertile.

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  2. Wow, powerful poeming!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. This poem is as sensual as the waves of the ocean. Perfect!

    Liked by 3 people

  4. I feel very much like falling in love seeing the sea in your lover’s eyes.

    Liked by 2 people

  5. A beautiful intimacy!💕❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Nice last two lines about being spent as night.

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  7. Can only agree to the other commentors. Wonderful answer to the challenge. Michael

    Liked by 1 person

  8. lync56

    A very sensual poem

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    Liked by 1 person

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