Extasis – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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Bjorn at dVerse has invited us to speak metaphorically.

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Extasis

I desire to write the curves of you
that my fingers might dance you, and
having dipped my quill in the
dark well of your silken ink
that glides my page with
such soft egress,
we would language in caress
as whispered feathers
fly to purring clouds.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

Note: Extasis – Latin borrowed from the Greek – ecstasy or rapture.

Paul, pvcann.com

53 Comments

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53 responses to “Extasis – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Dipping his quill hey? A very sensual piece.

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  2. Very nice verbing here. I like the whole writing thing, you extend the metaphor so well. And it’s sexy.

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  3. A very metaphorically sensual poem and a very substantial quill! 🙂

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  4. Nice metaphor: “that my fingers might dance you”

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  5. Amy

    So beautifully expressed, Paul.

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  6. Beverly Crawford

    Ecstatically erotic!!!!

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  7. I really love how you can write about passion in such a way… I can really feel how words can seduce.

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  8. Love how you play with words! Steamy! Metaphorically speaking, of course 🙂

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  9. Rob Kistner

    Excellent use of metaphor Paul! Creatively conceived, and very effective!

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  10. Very sensual! Reminds me of a Leonard Cohen song.

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  11. Fluently written, Paul! Love it! The explaination of the word source too. Have a nice week! Michael

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  12. Beautiful gorgeous writing Paul.

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  14. lync56

    Very beautiful and erotic

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  15. Beautiful & Romantic!! 🙂

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