Bjorn at dVerse has invited us to speak metaphorically.
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I desire to write the curves of you
that my fingers might dance you, and
having dipped my quill in the
dark well of your silken ink
that glides my page with
such soft egress,
we would language in caress
as whispered feathers
fly to purring clouds.
ยฉPaul Vincent Cannon
Note: Extasis – Latin borrowed from the Greek – ecstasy or rapture.
Paul, pvcann.com
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Relax! Let your eyes wander and quiet your mind with some visual therapy. A picture is always more than you can see. You will also find my own illustrations, animations and sometimes short stories. You never know what you will find so make sure to come back.
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Smoothly written ๐ฅ
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Many thanks.
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Ooh baby๐
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Yeah! ๐
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The minute I sent that, I thought, omg, did I really write that ๐๐
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Lol, well first reactions are indicative ๐
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Oh well, done๐
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๐
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Dipping his quill hey? A very sensual piece.
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Many thanks Fatima, much appreciated.
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Great work.
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Many thanks.
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Oh my!
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What can I say, yes to that Punam, thank you.
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Your poem says all! You are so welcome. ๐
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Very nice verbing here. I like the whole writing thing, you extend the metaphor so well. And it’s sexy.
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Thank you Sarah, I must say, I love metaphors, so glad you liked it.
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A very metaphorically sensual poem and a very substantial quill! ๐
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I love your humour, thank you Tom, enjoyed your thought.
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Nice metaphor: “that my fingers might dance you”
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Thank you Frank, glad you liked that.
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So beautifully expressed, Paul.
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Thank you so much Amy.
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Ecstatically erotic!!!!
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Thank you so much Beverly. I so hope youโre getting my comments because when I post them I canโt see them.
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I need a fan ๐
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But Iโm a fan of yours already ๐
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You’re making me blush. Heehee.
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Lol, my work is done ๐
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I really love how you can write about passion in such a way… I can really feel how words can seduce.
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Sometimes they seem to write themselves and I feel a bit cheeky putting my name to them, thank you for those kind words and thoughts Bjorn.
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Love how you play with words! Steamy! Metaphorically speaking, of course ๐
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O but of course, lol, thank you Dawn. ๐
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Welcome!
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Excellent use of metaphor Paul! Creatively conceived, and very effective!
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Well, that is a wonderful compliment Rob, thank you very much for that indeed.
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Very sensual! Reminds me of a Leonard Cohen song.
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Ah, Leonard Cohen, nice to be reminded, thank you Liz.
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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Fluently written, Paul! Love it! The explaination of the word source too. Have a nice week! Michael
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Yes, thank you Michael.
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Beautiful gorgeous writing Paul.
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Thanks ever so much Megha.
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My pleasure Paul. I have not been reading a lot there days but make to read yours whenever I can
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Thank you, that is a wonderful compliment Megha.
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wonderful!
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Very kind, thank you.
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Thank you for sharing it.
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Very beautiful and erotic
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It is that!
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Beautiful & Romantic!! ๐
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Thank you so much for sharing your response ๐
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