dVerse Poets – Open Link Night
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That feeling
when stillness moves,
vertiginous upheaval
transfer of heat,
second law of the
thermodynamics of love
rising,
growing,
but should it cool
then let the grasses
caress you to a
stillness that moves.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
Paul, pvcann.com
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محمد القربي
poetry, short story, novel, MLT, medical lab technology, self help, mind management
this app has always been difficult to navigate for me
Sachin Singh's Institute for Power and Prosperity
Myworldview
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Writing about the stars and everything beneath it.
You are definitely a romantic….♡
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Can’t escape that, it is in the blood, thank you.
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A, AB, O and R for romance
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Lol, lever retort
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♥♥♥
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🙂
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❤️
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“Thermodynamics of love”
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🙂
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Love how you phrase this!
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Many thanks VJ
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So welcome!
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Love this, sexy, hot,
Also scratchy…
Very loverly poem Paul
Very human 😉
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😉 thank you so much Lona.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Appreciate that Charles
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Happy to share this, My Friend!!
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When does the heat transfer stop?
It must necessarily stop.
My English is comparatively bad, but I like to read your poems. 😉
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Thank you so much Gerhard. Your English is quite good. Thermodynamics tells us that the sun will eventually run out, but not for billions of years yet, love can run low, but we can refuel 🙂
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Hopefully so! 🙂
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Lovely thank you ♥️
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Love the title and the sensual quality of this poem. Well done!
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Thank you so much for that Sarah.
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Oh this is absolutely lovely!! ❤️❤️
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What a line “second law of the
thermodynamics of love”. Seems you are a technican, Paul? Right? 😉 But i love it. Michael
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Lol, no, but I sure enjoyed physics at school, and am passionate about Quantum.
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🙂 Great, Paul!
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🙂
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Thanks for sharing this fine piece! Excellent write. See you in a couple weeks Paul, when dVerse returns. In honor of Solli Raphael: A Smidgen of Thought
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Appreciate your encouraging thoughts Rob. And thank you for the direct link too.
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Such stillness moves every heart… really lovely.
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Thank you Bjorn, yes indeed.
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“that feeling when stillness moves”
I love poets.
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Thank you so much Xan.
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I love the imagery, Paul.
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Thank you so much Winnie.
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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Enjoyed reading your poetry. I love a good poem that’s longer than three lines and 17 syllables.
Your poetry flows like a river. That’s what its supposed to do. Kept my intrest to read all the words and turn the page.
Well done.
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Well, that is a wonderful compliment, thank you so much for sharing those encouraging words.
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Another very beautiful poem
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Glad you liked it.
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Beautiful 💖
Specially the title “stillness ..”
What a combination .. stillness and move . Brilliant!! I like oxymorons.
I love the word stillness 💕 just the sound of it brings solace.
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I’m so glad it has that affect Nalini. Yes, the fact that we are so inwardly moved by stillness is a wonder and a joy.
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First read, I felt the contrast of stillness and movement and how they could co-exist, such as being still while our minds race or sending positive energy out to the world as we sit quietly. Second interpretation was the way stillness can move one’s soul, the tranquility that can be felt so immensely that it awakens you. Either way, this poem is beautiful.
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and response, and thank you for the wonderful compliment Mish.
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