Invitation – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

Subtle – VJs Weekly Challenge 54

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Invitation

Days passed
as sly glances became overt
with no response,
though no overture was proffered
she dallied by the lift
and waited by the copier,
he was oblivious
until that one day
she lingered in the cafe,
sat next to him, and
hit him with an invitation
written on her face.

Β©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

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39 Comments

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39 responses to “Invitation – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Wonderful poem and the picture is also.

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  2. Oh, the office crush. Who hasn’t had one of those? Everyone else can see it except the intended. Nice one, Paul.

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  3. Have you heard the saying, “I chased him until he caught me.”

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  4. Amy

    “…with an invitation written on her face.” So sweet. πŸ™‚

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  5. Oh, the last line is the perfect finale!

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  6. xome blokes can be a tad slow … nice one πŸ™‚

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  7. Great post, Paul!! Men aren’t usually adept at non-verbal communication unless it stares them in the face! LOL!

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  8. lync56

    Another beautiful poem

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