Young Maggie – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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Young Maggie

Big Daddy braved the hot roof
and brow-beat young Maggie with a
“Where’s he hiding?”
kind of look;
“O Brick?” said Maggie,
“He’s just hanging out,
I guess he’ll drop in later.”

©Paul Vincent Cannon


Referencing Tennessee William’s play ‘Cat On A Hot Tin Roof’



Filed under challenge, Free Verse, Humour, life, love, poem

35 responses to “Young Maggie – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Cute picture with an equally fun poem.

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  2. Hélène - Willow Poetry

    just hanging out….this is cute and funny.

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  3. This is a great depiction of the photo!!

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  4. 🙂 Good one!
    There are too many Big Daddies in this fairy-tale world!


  5. Well-done double-entendre. (Which BTB is an English phrase. We Frogs don’t use it).

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  6. Hahaha! I love it, Paul! Great take on the prompt.

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  7. Brilliant! I love the way you’ve connected it to the characters in the play/film.


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  9. Great poem! Love the “just hanging out.”

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  10. lync56

    Very well written – I love it so creative and humorous


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