I Dare – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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I Dare

To close the door
I close myself,
hinged on a thin
premise of protection
against your congealed words,
While yet sowing
Seeds of destruction,
ridged against
the pain,
and shutting out the world,
but the pain lingers,
until once again
I dare to open that door,
and so, to open myself.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

Paul, pvcann.com


Filed under Free Verse, life, mindfulness, poem, relationship

48 responses to “I Dare – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Profoundly beautiful, Paul! Sometimes we need to close that door in order not to get hurt again though the pain is still there.

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  2. Sometimes…we do what we have to. Deeply moving, Paul.

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  3. Poignant and beautifully penned, Paul.

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  4. Amy

    …and so, to open myself. Beautifully ended.

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  5. The vulnerability is palpable. Beautifully expressed.

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  6. The pain we inflict upon ourselves while closing doors. This one hit home, as I often dream of inadequate doors. Food for thought.

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  7. Some doors are better left closed.

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  8. Beautiful, and the last two lines are best. Michael

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  9. Sooner or later we have to open the door…
    removing the dressing
    showing the world
    the beauty of scars.

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  10. I think sometimes it’s all about timing, preparing ourselves for opening certain doors. What is on the other side can be unpredictable but sometimes a necessary place to journey through.

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  11. Your heart is showing, Paul!


  12. Just what I did this week, and it is painful

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  13. Well it’s been a while but lately, memories…

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  14. I love the way you have defined the fear and the anguish we feel inside us in opening ourself to a vulnerable situation again and again.

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  15. Daring to be vulnerable again can be a frightening and potentislly painful choice – but it also affords one the greatest chance to feel alive, authentic. Excellent write Paul.

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  16. lync56

    Mmmm interesting



  17. Thank you, Paul! As I read this, I experienced courage––and vulnerability. A spiritual teacher of mine says that “perfect vulnerability is perfect protection.” Still looking at that. 🙂 Good to visit your blog, and so glad to see you pop up on my notifications!

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