May 22, 2019 · 1:44 pm
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Shared Them Round – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

Go Dog Go Cafe – Tuesday Writing Challenge

 

Shared Them Round

Slurries, slushies, confectioned ice,
such sweetness
palatable and fun,
I crushed my dreams with lime
and shared them round.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

Paul, pvcann.com

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14 responses to “Shared Them Round – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon”

  1. rothpoetry
    May 22, 2019 at 2:56 pm

    A wonderful analogy!

    Liked by 3 people

    Reply
  3. Hélène - Willow Poetry
    May 22, 2019 at 5:46 pm

    Sweet poem, slushies, squeeze the lime.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  4. OIKOS™-Publishing
    May 23, 2019 at 10:38 am

    Beauutiful, i agree with rothpoetry. 😉 Michael

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  6. lync56
    June 5, 2019 at 1:23 pm

    Interesting!!

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    Liked by 1 person

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