Shared Them Round – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

Go Dog Go Cafe – Tuesday Writing Challenge

 

Shared Them Round

Slurries, slushies, confectioned ice,
such sweetness
palatable and fun,
I crushed my dreams with lime
and shared them round.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

Paul, pvcann.com

14 Comments

Filed under Five Lines, Free Verse, life, poem

14 responses to “Shared Them Round – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. A wonderful analogy!

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Sweet poem, slushies, squeeze the lime.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Beauutiful, i agree with rothpoetry. 😉 Michael

    Liked by 1 person

  4. lync56

    Interesting!!

    >

    Liked by 1 person

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