5 Lines – Ho Hum
Photo provided: Patricia’s Place
Today was yesterday and
tomorrow too will be
the coat-hanger of other days
a similitude of view, ever
awaiting just one discordant note.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
Filed under Five Lines, Free Verse, life, poem
Tagged as "Ever Awaiting", 5 Lines, Free Verse, Ho_Hum, In Other Words, poem
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Thank you Richa, appreciate your thoughts.
Great play of words! Profoundly beautiful, Paul.
Very kind Winnie, thank you for that 🙂
You’re welcome, Paul! 🙂
I wait for the love, the harmony, the inclusion … those discordant notes will play anyway 🙂
Yes, though many miss them and never awaken.
oh their loss … can’t find them if you don’t look diligently 🙂
Salt in the oats makes a horse drink
Just one discordant note and…
Many thanks Punam, very kind.
You are welcome, Paul!
This is poetry!
Thank you, very kind words.
“The coat-hanger of tomorrow” great use of phrase!
Well I did not quite quote that correctly.
🙂 yes that sense of things just hanging around and not doing or changing.
A “coat hanger” day – love it.
Love Line 3.
Yes, ironically I wanted to hang a line, and there it was, that monotony of frame.
Thank you, yes indeed
Very thought provoking
Many thanks Lyn.
“the coat-hanger of other days” – great line, Paul!
Thank you so much for that, appreciate your encouraging words.
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
Thank you for that.
Always a pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, Paul!! Have a great day!
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