Limbo – dVerse Poets – Poetics
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Your circular saw intrusion
slicing the air,
unwelcome jolt
my emotions raw
jangled,
as the door shuts
tension remains
your departure
leaves the air unresolved,
like a tightrope
I’m on edge
with the day.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
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vida equilibrada é a chave do sucesso
محمد القربي
poetry, short story, novel, MLT, medical lab technology, self help, mind management
this app has always been difficult to navigate for me
Sachin Singh's Institute for Power and Prosperity
Myworldview
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Oy. Yes! Unsettled for sure!
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That horrible period between tension and resolution, I still hate it.
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Me too! And some, unfortunately, never do resolve.
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True, some stay.
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Me… me in so many ways
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Kindred spirits perhaps, I need closure, it unsettles me.
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You’ve caught the unresolved tension perfectly.
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Thank you so much for that.
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I love your take on the prompt, Paul!
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Thank you so much Winnie.
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You’re welcome, Paul.
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Know that feeling. I need closure.
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Ah, yes, it lingers and I need closure too, unsettling. Thanks for reflecting on this Sandy.
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Welcome, Paul.
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🙂
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It is so unnerving!
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Yes, so true, and it stays awhile, thanks Punam
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You are welcome, Paul.
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So natural.
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Straight from the gut, feelings are so powerful.
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Hmm. I know what you mean.
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🙂
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that sense of unease permeates and we all need resolution, helps us sleep better at night!
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“Your circular saw intrusion” wow the imagery drew a visceral response. Lovely poem, Paul that speaks to, and for, others.
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Ah, my work is done 🙂 In fact was looking for that in my own response, how to name that awful moment, thank you for your reflection on it.
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I felt it, definitely! Hope all is well.
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Oh it is very well, was tapping into an age old body memory.
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I love the symbolism of the circular saw intruding!
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Thank you Dwight, yes, i was trying to capture that wrenching feeling.
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You nailed it very well!
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Very kind.
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Wordings incite a call for fortitude and taking a disposition as perpetrator or victim. Nicely orchestrated Paul. ☕😊
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Ah, you noticed, thank you so much for that reflection.
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Imagine a relationship where this is your groundhog day.
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Arrgghh, noooooo
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Wonderful, evocative response to the prompt!
(I’m having WP issues so I’m sorry if this posts twice 🙄)
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Yes, the app is unstable again, this morning mine was having trouble with replying. No problem 🙂
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Yes another true emotion evoked so well by your words
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Horrible feeling though.
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Love the wonderful ending “on edge with the day”. 😉
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Thank you so much Michael.
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Always a great pleasure and honour to me, Paul! Michael
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V ery kind 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
TEETH-GRINDING LOVE?
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Yeah, the hard yards for sure. Thank you Jonathan.
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