March 28, 2019 · 8:00 pm
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You Couldn’t Wait – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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You Couldn’t Wait

I was ready to bleed for you
but you couldn’t wait
you crept in and
stole my heart
incarcerated in your beauty.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

Paul, pvcann.com

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14 responses to “You Couldn’t Wait – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon”

  1. Ennle Madresan
    March 28, 2019 at 9:05 pm

    Last line is powerful.

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    Reply
  2. pvcann
    March 29, 2019 at 12:27 am

    Thank you for your thoughtful response 🙂

    Like

    Reply
  3. francisashis
    March 29, 2019 at 2:00 am

    Wow! lovely indeed.Thanks a lot Sir.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  6. lync56
    April 1, 2019 at 8:06 am

    Short and very very sweet

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    Liked by 1 person

    Reply
  8. lolodlula
    April 12, 2019 at 7:42 pm

    Ay this is not finished… I’m longing for more…

    Liked by 1 person

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