You Couldn’t Wait – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

Thief – RDP Wednesday

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You Couldn’t Wait

I was ready to bleed for you
but you couldn’t wait
you crept in and
stole my heart
incarcerated in your beauty.

ยฉPaul Vincent Cannon

 

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14 Comments

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14 responses to “You Couldn’t Wait – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Ennle Madresan

    Last line is powerful.

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Thank you for your thoughtful response ๐Ÿ™‚

    Like

  3. Wow! lovely indeed.Thanks a lot Sir.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. lync56

    Short and very very sweet

    >

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Ay this is not finished… Iโ€™m longing for more…

    Liked by 1 person

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