March 28, 2019 · 1:47 pm
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Loved – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

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Loved

The rugged sandstone fell in chunks
fragmenting in the river below
a millennia past,
and though nothing happened for a time,
or so it seemed,
the stone surrendered to the water
who loved the stone
to an external beauty
that belied its inner strength.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

Paul, pvcann.com

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26 responses to “Loved – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon”

  1. V.J. Knutson
    March 28, 2019 at 2:52 pm

    Beautiful, Paul, both as an explanation of how rocks gain their polish, but also as a metaphor.

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  3. Hélène - Willow Poetry
    March 28, 2019 at 4:34 pm

    Exquisite meaning in your words Paul.

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  4. rugby843
    March 28, 2019 at 7:18 pm

    Not to be repetitive, but I loved this poem and the image it brings.

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  5. Ennle Madresan
    March 28, 2019 at 9:18 pm

    WOW!

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  7. Winnie
    March 29, 2019 at 10:29 am

    Beautifully penned as usual, Paul.

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  8. JayParkhe
    March 29, 2019 at 11:08 am

    ❤️🌹👍🙏

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  11. lync56
    April 1, 2019 at 8:05 am

    Beautifully deep

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