Temperature Rising – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

Temperature – RDP Thursday

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Temperature Rising

We started at zero,
undressing,
caressing,
falling,
sliding,
temperature rising,
sweating,
feverish,
a commensurate act
we were lost
over the edge
and then came back
starting at zero.

©Paul Vincent Cannon

 

Paul, pvcann.com

21 Comments

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21 responses to “Temperature Rising – a poem by Paul Vincent Cannon

  1. Hélène - Willow Poetry

    What excitement!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. This is so great, Paul. I felt the temperature come full circle in the poem. That’s a real talent! Blessings 🙂
    Debbie

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Beautifully woven into a full cycle of blissful unity!😊

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Lyn CANNON

    Hot hot hot – well written

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    Liked by 1 person

  5. Oh my, Paul! Is it just me or is it hot in here?? 😉

    Liked by 1 person

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