So cool
as you touch my lips,
I love the wet
and the spice of you
a rich perfume
that I can taste,
smooth
unblended nectar
like liquid velvet,
and in all the world
there’s none like you
at all
my jar of whiskey.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
Photo: returnofkings.com
Paul, pvcann.com
Filed under Free Verse, life, poem, Quadrille
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The Writings & Ramblings of Colm Black
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A blog dedicated to writers...and the people, places, and things that spark their creativity
The Astronomical Poet
I'm just an ordinary girl putting a bunch of ordinary words together, trying to tell an extraordinary story.
Random notions
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Clever! lol
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Thank you Dawn, I couldn’t resist.
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I bet you could write a poem about a phone book and it would sound sexy lol
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Actually, wait, no , Lol, but I’d sure give it ago, thanks for the compliment, much appreciated.
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Wow this is very clever Paul..😊
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That was very thoughtful and cheeky 😂
Great work, Paul..
Regards
Dee Kay
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I love surprise endings!!! Good one!
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Thanks so much Jill, appreciate your response, so glad you liked it.
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Nice one PV, clever with the image following the words. Loved it 👍🏻
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Clink. Thank you John appreciate your thoughtful responses, glad you liked it.
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Beautiful and ecstatic words of poetry so well composed for a glass of whisky, Paul. Too good.
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Yes, I wanted a twist that was different – thank you so much for your reflection.
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Welcome Paul.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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lol I suspected as much 😉
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😉 Too clever by far you are 🙂
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Not a big fan of liquor but I can tell a good one from a bad. A good whiskey definitely has some character to it. This is great imagery.
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Thank you for reflecting on this – much appreciated. I love a single malt.
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Yes! Nectar of the Gods 🙂
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A poem after my own heart.
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A fellow connoisseur
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You got me again, Paul! Cracked me up on the twist at the end!! Bravo!!
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Yes, I was looking for that twist, it took longer to get it.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Many thanks 🙂
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None, indeed!
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🙂 You know
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Sure do! 🙂
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Ah! A good whiskey is a good thing! 🙂
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And how! 🙂
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🙂
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An Ode to your precious whiskey
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Absolutely
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