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Warm Solution
The cloak of your mystery
opens to reveal but a riddle,
your lips,
are they passion?
Or, are they dark heart?
Immovable,
hypnotised by your gaze,
I just stood there,
but you solved the riddle,
as your cloak fell,
and you opened your arms.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
Paul, pvcann.com
You’ve captured but a moment, so beautifully.
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Thank you for that wonderful response Dawn.
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You’re welcome, Paul. Your work is always a pleasure to read.
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Very well written. Thank you
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment too.
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Pretty nice! 😊
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Very kind
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oh you are a master!
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I’ll have to widen the doorway now, you are very kind Kate 🙂 day
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lol I would never give praise if I suspected you were looking for an ego boost 😉
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Glad to know 😉
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I love how you create such strong imagery with two layers of meaning
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