Bluff Knoll. It began as a rivulet then turned to a trickle, and following the showers, a running creek.
That sultry night,
dancing slow,
I felt your heart speaking,
as I traced the line of your neck
to your lips,
while in the small of your back
a bead was speaking of your passion,
and just for a moment,
I felt you shudder.
©Paul Vincent Cannon
Paul,
pvcann.com
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This is amazing wonderfully written like everything you write.
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You are very kind, such a wonderful compliment – thank you so much.
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You’re most welcome and thank you for your kindness too.
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Only spiritual calmness could inspire such vigilance. A very insightful share!
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Thank you so much, very kind.
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you rock …
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Very kind, thank you Kate, means a lot
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always welcome Paul!
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Oh my my..such gorgeous poem and I loved the comparison you did
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Thank you Megha, such a lovely response
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Just beautiful … pic and poem.
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Thank you so much, appreciate your lovely response.
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You’re welcome. Have you read any of Michael Ondaatje’s poems? Your work reminds me of his, the rhythm, the lyric, the depth.
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I have read a few, now I must go and look again, thank you, nice to be seen that way.
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Wow!
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Thank you Rupali
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This is beautiful! Your words had me thinking about them long after I had finished reading them… Your poems have a way of allowing us to revisit our own treasured memories.
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Wow, thank you for that Grady, enjoyed your response very much.
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So beautiful and insightful Paul!!!
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Thank you, a lovely compliment indeed.
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It did start slow…the emotion slowly pushes through and intensified till the end…
Bravo!!!
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Many thanks, so enjoyed your response too.
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Beautiful and romantic❤️
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Thank you so much
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Wonderful flow of emotion. Amazing write Paul.
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Thank you so much Helene, appreciate the compliment.
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Welcome Paul.
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Paul, this is awesomely stunning!!! So romantic, sensuous and sexy!!!
Bellissimo!!!
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Very kind indeed, thank you so much for those thoughts
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you very much
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Always my pleasure, Paul!!!
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Love how you gradually increase the intensity
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Many thanks Punam I really appreciate that
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You are so welcome Paul. It is a pleasure to read your posts.
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Wow such emotion evoked and passion
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Thank you Lyn
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Very nice
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Thank you very much.
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