Rain on the Blackwood.
Just Five More Minutes
Rain spattering our roof,
rivulets
gutters gurgling
as the torrent sluices
down, down,
and further down the doona I snuggle.
The thunder of downpipes,
quiet slick on the glass,
the soft patter of drops on leaves,
such a beautiful sound.
mmmm
What?
Tea?
mmmm
an elbow finds my ribs.
Please?
But it’s warm in here.
To no avail,
as the reply comes,
it’s your turn.
An inward sigh,
I’m loath to breach the doona
and face the cold.
Just five more minutes …
Β©Paul Cannon
Paul,
pvcann.com
Wonderfully penned!
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Very kind Winnie
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A wonderful read, Paul.
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Thank you Sandy, so enjoyed your response, and thanks for reading.
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You are welcome, Paul.
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Wonderful post Paul π
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Thank you so much Pam
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You’re welcome
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Wonderful!β€
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Thank you
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Congrarulations to your 1000th follower!!!
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Hey, thanks for noticing, amazing really. Thanks too for reading, appreciate that very much.
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Beautiful as usual ππ
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Oh how well I know that feeling, well expressed!
Your followers are booming … your poetry π
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Ah those winter days, thanks Kate π
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Oh how true !!!!
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Yes indeed
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What a beautiful description of the rain and its soothing effect on us.
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And it so happened that this was my morning too, but then, it is winter. Thank you Megha.
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It has rained so heavily in my part of the world just half an hour back.
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And here, I love that, connected by rain
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Yes me too.
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perfect! rainy weather and snugggled under the covers, of course its your turn to get the tea!
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Oh, not you too! There’s no peace.
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Really wonderful penned, with a great corresponding image. Thank you Paul (and excuse another delay. ;-( ) Michael
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Many thanks Michael, have missed your postings very much.
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Thank you too, Paul! Excuse the delay. I also missed your posting, then i remembered parallax. The overview inside the wp-reader is a little bit confusing. π Michael
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Indeed, glad to have you around
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