Amble On …
Deepdene, between Hamelin Bay and the Augusta lighthouse, the water worn rock is a fabulous site as you come around the bend on the Cape to Cape Track.
Our Peregrinations
Once you said we should go
out beyond the cliffs,
down to the beach
and restore our senses.
We strolled,
clambered,
seeking.
All the while rejoicing.
We dared to tread seaweed
al dente, or crisp.
Feasted on moist salt air,
and drank in the shimmer of the sea.
We skirted the edges of foamy wash,
then paddled,
immersing,
retreating once again.
We laughed,
we traded soul.
Invited to each other,
surrendered.
That afternoon along the shore
we navigated love,
immersing, never retreating,
washed, found, and whole.
©Paul Cannon
Paul,
pvcann.com
I do so enjoy the way you turn a phrase. Thank you for sharing your poet’s eye and words.
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David, you always encourage, and you are indeed the fellow traveller
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This scene is a feast for the eyes; your verse a feast for the soul.
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Appreciate that thoughtful response Sandy
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You are welcome.
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“That afternoon along the shore we navigated love”- sigh. So lovely.
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And such a beautiful response – thank you for that
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The pleasure is mine. Your words are beautiful.
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Well, you have really made my day
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Beautiful
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Thank you Lyn
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Sea and love…a heady combination!
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Ah yes indeed, thank you
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You are welcome.
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oh your verse is sublime .. uniting nature with love and joyful exploration 🙂
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Wonderful to have your comment Kate
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well earned, thanks Paul!
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Made my day
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love this one, a joyous love poem
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Thank you – yes, joyous
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Great messages and lovely poems. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. All the best
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Many Thanks Lindi, very much appreciated
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Paul! This is BEAUTIFUL! My favorite part:
“We laughed,
we traded soul.
Invited to each other,
surrendered.”
The more we live these words of yours, exchanging our true selves with one another — unafraid of hurt or allowing the mind to overthink, and instead just being…fully being…that is peace, surrender and experiencing…
Thank you for sharing this. Big love to you! And keep putting out these beautiful pieces. Xx
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Thank you Antasha/CAJ. and thanks for the encouragement, big love to you too. xx
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